Where did this walk begin
We met ,I smiled
You hesitated
I pushed
You smiled
We started our journey
No destination
No thoughts of where to go
Or When we would get there
We only walk one way
We only walk one way
Not towards hope
Only repetition
We walk
We walk
We walk in circles
6 comments:
did you write that?
yes, in fact, i did. that is if you think it's good. if you think it's bad then no i didn't.
i think it's good. a good poem is an expression that is heart deep.
i think it's good. i like the repetition.
thanks! it's a little scary to share with people but always good to get encouragement.
you should share more of this!!
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